Feedback: Its realistic and things like that happen in real life, it can help stop bullying
Improvements : instead of three people have two people getting bullied so the audience can understand the story better
we are going to get rid of one of the story lines to make the campaign easier and simple and we are going to change our characters around so that we have a variety of races involved.
Add a label to this (Unit 2) as I couldn't find it originally! You have made some really thoughtful improvements to this task, and acted on the feedback given. Well done!
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ReplyDeleteIts realistic and things like that happen in real life, it can help stop bullying
Improvements :
instead of three people have two people getting bullied so the audience can understand the story better
we are going to get rid of one of the story lines to make the campaign easier and simple and we are going to change our characters around so that we have a variety of races involved.
Add a label to this (Unit 2) as I couldn't find it originally! You have made some really thoughtful improvements to this task, and acted on the feedback given. Well done!
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